Hi I have just written my first Story and submitted it here on Lush but it was rejected. Could someone please help with it?Maybe proof-read my story? Any help woult be greatly appriciatted
It was a spring day bright and sunny but not too warm. Jakob and some of his friends were in town at the street fair drinking beer and enjoying themselves. As the evening slowly approached, fair attendance shifted from families with small children to teenagers showing off in front of each other by buying alcohol whether they were allowed to or not. Jakob saw some of his son's friends trying...
Added 27 Jul 2020 | Category Cheating
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